⏰ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
➕ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
↔️ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
🎯 Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "Before the show, the actors rehearsed lines." | |
| "She likes robotics. Furthermore, she enjoys coding." | |
| "He was ready, although his hands still shook." | |
| "They explored new foods, like dumplings and samosas." |
I enjoy chess club. , I enjoy the debate team.
She memorized her speech. , she still felt nervous.
We sorted the recycling. we hauled it outside.
He is a careful planner. , he works well with a team.
, the results were posted on the board.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
☐ I clearly stated my opinion/topic ☐ My ideas are in a logical order ☐ I used transitions between ideas ☐ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
☐ I gave reasons or evidence ☐ I explained my evidence ☐ I used specific details ☐ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
☐ My spelling is correct ☐ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing:
Prompt: Write about a place you enjoy for a younger student.