โฐ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
โ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
โ๏ธ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
๐ฏ Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "First, she packed her bag." | |
| "He likes pizza. Also, he loves tacos." | |
| "I wanted to go, but it was raining." | |
| "She plays many sports, such as soccer and tennis." |
I love reading. , I enjoy reading about animals.
She studied hard for the test. , she did not get a perfect score.
We made the batter. we poured it into the pan.
He is a great swimmer. , he is also a fast runner.
, they crossed the finish line together.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
โ I clearly stated my opinion/topic โ My ideas are in a logical order โ I used transitions between ideas โ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
โ I gave reasons or evidence โ I explained my evidence โ I used specific details โ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
โ My spelling is correct โ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing: