โฐ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
โ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
โ๏ธ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
๐ฏ Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "After lunch, the class went to recess." | |
| "He enjoys baking. Also, he enjoys decorating cakes." | |
| "She practiced every day, yet she still felt shaky." | |
| "We tried new instruments, for example the cello and the flute." |
I love science fairs. , I enjoy math competitions.
He reviewed his notes. , the test still felt hard.
We collected the leaves. we sorted them by color.
She is a quick thinker. , she is very organized.
, the class presented their projects.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
โ I clearly stated my opinion/topic โ My ideas are in a logical order โ I used transitions between ideas โ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
โ I gave reasons or evidence โ I explained my evidence โ I used specific details โ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
โ My spelling is correct โ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing:
Prompt: Write about a goal you have for someone who helped you.