โฐ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
โ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
โ๏ธ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
๐ฏ Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "After that, the team lined up." | |
| "He likes hiking. Also, he enjoys biking." | |
| "She practiced hard, although she still felt shaky." | |
| "They tried new sports, for example fencing and archery." |
I love music. , I enjoy dancing too.
He rehearsed for weeks. , he still felt nervous.
We cleared the table. we washed the dishes.
She is a great artist. , she is a talented writer.
, the curtain finally rose.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
โ I clearly stated my opinion/topic โ My ideas are in a logical order โ I used transitions between ideas โ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
โ I gave reasons or evidence โ I explained my evidence โ I used specific details โ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
โ My spelling is correct โ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing:
Prompt: Write about helping at home for your grandparent.