⏰ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
➕ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
↔️ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
🎯 Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "Then, the crew loaded the boxes." | |
| "He likes soccer. Furthermore, he enjoys basketball." | |
| "She was nervous, although she performed well." | |
| "They tried new hobbies, like pottery and origami." |
I love puzzles. , I enjoy building models.
He practiced daily. , the recital felt scary.
We measured the wood. we sawed the pieces.
She is a fast runner. , she is a strong jumper.
, the judges announced the winner.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
☐ I clearly stated my opinion/topic ☐ My ideas are in a logical order ☐ I used transitions between ideas ☐ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
☐ I gave reasons or evidence ☐ I explained my evidence ☐ I used specific details ☐ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
☐ My spelling is correct ☐ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing:
Prompt: Write about a rainy afternoon for your principal.