โฐ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
โ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
โ๏ธ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
๐ฏ Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "Next, the class lined up quietly." | |
| "She enjoys crafts. Also, she likes photography." | |
| "He was tired, yet he finished the race." | |
| "We tried new snacks, for instance dried mango and trail mix." |
I like chess. , I enjoy checkers too.
She rehearsed her lines. , she still felt shaky.
We set up the easels. we mixed the paint.
He is a skilled builder. , he loves designing.
, the audience applauded loudly.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
โ I clearly stated my opinion/topic โ My ideas are in a logical order โ I used transitions between ideas โ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
โ I gave reasons or evidence โ I explained my evidence โ I used specific details โ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
โ My spelling is correct โ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing:
Prompt: Write about a celebration for a teammate.