โฐ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
โ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
โ๏ธ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
๐ฏ Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "Before that, she packed her lunch." | |
| "He plays chess. Furthermore, he enjoys checkers." | |
| "It was raining, yet we still went for a walk." | |
| "She tried new foods, such as mango and papaya." |
I like drawing. , I enjoy painting too.
She studied all week. , the test felt tricky.
We mixed the batter. we poured it into the pan.
He is a fast swimmer. , he is a skilled diver.
, everyone lined up at the starting line.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
โ I clearly stated my opinion/topic โ My ideas are in a logical order โ I used transitions between ideas โ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
โ I gave reasons or evidence โ I explained my evidence โ I used specific details โ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
โ My spelling is correct โ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing:
Prompt: Write about a trip outside for a friend.