โฐ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
โ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
โ๏ธ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
๐ฏ Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "Meanwhile, her brother set the table." | |
| "She loves painting. Besides, she enjoys sculpture." | |
| "He practiced daily, yet he still felt nervous." | |
| "She collects rocks, like quartz and granite." |
I enjoy science. , I love astronomy the most.
He trained for months. , he still felt unready.
We gathered the supplies. we started building.
She is a strong runner. , she is a great swimmer.
, the coach blew the whistle to start the game.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
โ I clearly stated my opinion/topic โ My ideas are in a logical order โ I used transitions between ideas โ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
โ I gave reasons or evidence โ I explained my evidence โ I used specific details โ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
โ My spelling is correct โ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing:
Prompt: Write about a class project for your teacher.