โฐ Time: first, next, then, after, before, finally, meanwhile
โ Adding: also, in addition, another, besides, furthermore
โ๏ธ Contrast: but, however, although, on the other hand, yet
๐ฏ Example: for example, such as, for instance, like
| Sentence | Transition Type |
|---|---|
| "Meanwhile, the other team warmed up." | |
| "He plays drums. Besides, he plays guitar." | |
| "She was unsure, but she raised her hand anyway." | |
| "We visited new places, such as the aquarium and the planetarium." |
I love gardening. , I enjoy composting.
He studied the map. , he still felt lost.
We watered the seeds. we covered the pots.
She is a strong reader. , she is a careful editor.
, the trophy was handed out.
Rewrite WITH transition words to make it flow better:
Purpose & Organization (Score 1-4):
โ I clearly stated my opinion/topic โ My ideas are in a logical order โ I used transitions between ideas โ I have a strong conclusion
My score: / 4
Evidence & Elaboration (Score 1-4):
โ I gave reasons or evidence โ I explained my evidence โ I used specific details โ I used my own words
My score: / 4
Conventions (Score 0-2):
โ My spelling is correct โ My grammar and punctuation are correct
My score: / 2
What I will fix before turning in my writing:
Prompt: Write about a book you liked for the librarian.