Rule 1: Put quotation marks " " around the exact words someone says.
Rule 2: Start the spoken words with a capital letter.
Rule 3: Put punctuation (. ! ?) INSIDE the quotation marks.
Rule 4: Tell who is speaking (said, asked, yelled, whispered).
| Sentence | Correct? |
|---|---|
| "Grab an umbrella!" said Petra. | |
| Isaac said I am late. | |
| "Can you fix this?" asked Della. | |
| "go slow" said the coach. |
Grandpa said sit with me
Can I choose the game asked Tariq
That was marvelous yelled Bianca
The chef said taste this first
| Original | Better version |
|---|---|
| "I'm hopeful!" said Soren. | |
| "Keep trying," said the swim coach. | |
| "What's for dinner?" said Elena. | |
| "I'm okay now," said the girl quietly. |
Character 1: Character 2:
Organization: Does my writing have a clear beginning, middle, and end? โ Yes โ Not yet
Development: Did I include details or examples to support my ideas? โ Yes โ Not yet
Conventions: Did I check my spelling, capitals, and punctuation? โ Yes โ Not yet
One thing I want to improve:
Prompt: Write about a place you enjoy for a younger student.