Rule 1: Put quotation marks " " around the exact words someone says.
Rule 2: Start the spoken words with a capital letter.
Rule 3: Put punctuation (. ! ?) INSIDE the quotation marks.
Rule 4: Tell who is speaking (said, asked, yelled, whispered).
| Sentence | Correct? |
|---|---|
| "Try this one!" said Cyrus. | |
| Nina said I am proud. | |
| "Whose turn is it?" asked Malia. | |
| "come inside" said the coach. |
Mom said almost done
Can I hold it asked Rosa
That was incredible yelled Kian
The teacher said turn to page ten
| Original | Better version |
|---|---|
| "I'm curious!" said Hazel. | |
| "Take your time," said the tutor. | |
| "Who is next?" said Devon. | |
| "I understand now," said the girl quietly. |
Character 1: Character 2:
Organization: Does my writing have a clear beginning, middle, and end? โ Yes โ Not yet
Development: Did I include details or examples to support my ideas? โ Yes โ Not yet
Conventions: Did I check my spelling, capitals, and punctuation? โ Yes โ Not yet
One thing I want to improve:
Prompt: Write about a celebration for a teammate.