My animal:
| # | Fact | Category |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | ||
| 2 | ||
| 3 | ||
| 4 | ||
| 5 |
| Paragraph | Topic | Key Facts |
|---|---|---|
| 1. Introduction | What animal + interesting hook | |
| 2. Body ΒΆ 1 | ||
| 3. Body ΒΆ 2 | ||
| 4. Conclusion | Wrap up + why this animal is special |
| Criteria | β1 | ββ2 | βββ3 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Facts | 1β2 facts | 3β4 facts | 5+ facts |
| Organization | No clear order | Some order | Clear intro, body, conclusion |
| Details | Very basic | Some detail | Rich, specific details |
| Conventions | Many errors | Some errors | Few/no errors |
My score: / 12
Revision Task 1 β Strengthen Your Evidence: Find one place in your writing where you could add a more specific detail or example. Write the improved sentence here:
Revision Task 2 β Improve Your Transitions: Find one place where you moved from one idea to the next. Add or improve a transition word or phrase. Write it here:
Self-Assessment (SBA Rubric):
Purpose & Organization: / 4 β Evidence & Elaboration: / 4 β Conventions: / 2
My biggest strength in this piece:
My goal for next time: