My name:
Line 1: 5 syllables | Line 2: 7 syllables | Line 3: 5 syllables
My haiku topic:
Line 1 (5 syllables):
Line 2 (7 syllables):
Line 3 (5 syllables):
| Prompt | Your Simile |
|---|---|
| My heart felt as light as… | |
| The thunder crashed like… | |
| Her voice was as calm as… | |
| He jumped like… |
Now write a short poem (4 lines) using at least 2 similes:
Revision Task 1 — Strengthen Your Evidence: Find one place in your writing where you could add a more specific detail or example. Write the improved sentence here:
Revision Task 2 — Improve Your Transitions: Find one place where you moved from one idea to the next. Add or improve a transition word or phrase. Write it here:
Self-Assessment (SBA Rubric):
Purpose & Organization: / 4 — Evidence & Elaboration: / 4 — Conventions: / 2
My biggest strength in this piece:
My goal for next time:
Prompt: Write about helping at home for your grandparent.